Wednesday, August 20, 2008

Smokey attacks (Fiction)

It was a wet warm summer day, not everything in the neighborhood was well. There was a barn in a supposed to be deserted yard. Nobody except me knows what is in that barn. I will be telling you the story of Smokey Attacks!

One fabulous blue doe named Smokey kept working on opening the lock of her cage. She always said she would get out but in her mind she knew she probably wouldn't get out. Smokey kept trying, they had been locked up for a long time. When Smokey gave one last pull at the lock it came open. A black buck named Speedy started working on his lock. Smokey got a chocolate buck named Cocoa out of his cage. Then went to help her daughter Jasmine get out with her litter of six. At the same time Smokey got Jasmine out Speedy got out. They all were out pretty quickly. Copper a satin buck found straw that was warm and fresh. But nobody cared they where too hungry. A chocolate doe named Hershey said, "lets get the food cans open."

Smokey didn't like that Hershey was trying to tell everyone to get food but she didn't say anything. All the bunnies helped open the cans. When the can was opened Jasmine's babies started to hop to the can Jasmine skreeched, "behave your selves. " All the babies Skidded to a stop turned around and looked at there mother she said, "You should wait till I say it is okay." "I think you should have waited till your turn next time." "Okay mom, we will fulfill your wishes and wait for are turn" sighed the babies.

The food smelled so good that the babies started naghing there mom that they where so hungry and needed something to eat. Finally there mother said they could eat. She said "when your done ask grandmother Smokey to tell you stories. When they where done they listend to Smokey tell stories. Then they fell asleep in a bed of straw.

After two more days the rabbits ran out of water and it was pouring rain outside. Well when all looked lots Cocoa found a hole. He said he would go in and search. When he did he found it led right out of the barn. He told everybody but they didn't want to run away. So Cocoa went and found the hose and found a way to turn on the hose. Well he brought the hose next to the barn and the hole. He turned it on and got a nice refreshing gulp of water and went in and told everyone that there was water outside. So everyone went out and got a drink of water. when everyone had there fill he turned it off. Well three days have past and no people came.

When they thought they where abandoned the people walked in. All the bunnies hopped into there cages and the people went and fed and watered them. Smokey was releived to know they where not abandoned. And once again someone else was in charge.

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